The light has dimmed, the glory faded. All that's left of a loving village are the lonely ruins, crying from a distant. They lie there, tainted by time, vestiges of a peaceful yet distant past. Oerba, once covered with flowers, is now a barren land of dust and snow. It no longer resembles the home she once knew. From on top of Taejin's Tower, Fang gazed out at the wastage. All this chaos and loss, was it a result of the War of Transgression? Was this the evidence of her transformation into the beast, Ragnorak? Was this all her fault?

Fang fought back the tears that would have broken her. No, she cannot wipe. If that gate was to open, then she would never be able to close them again. She needed to be strong, strong enough to fight the cruel fates of a l'Cie. Fang knew from her wounded expression that Vanille needed her, especially now, especially here. Gazing into the distant, she tried to envision the last time they stood here. What a difference a century can make. From behind her, Fang heard Sazh calling her to go. Yes, she cannot afford to remember or to regret. The future is beckoning. The last fight is soon to come.

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, my first fanfic, so please be gentle on the criticism
I just thought that Chapter 11 needed more cutscenes
especially in Oerba (could have been so much more emotional)
so here's what I think Fang must have felt during that cut scene on Taejin's Tower

hint: this passage is much better if you read it while listening to Dust to Dust

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I have a feeling I've read this before somewhere...but anyway...
Lots of emotion, and a different side of Fang than what most people would expect. But, the main problem is that...it's too short....I really like it and I would like to see more from you.

Also, if you don't mind, would you be willing to post this on http://khfanliterature.webs.com/ because this place need more fanfic and this is a very good one? Though if you decide to, you'll have to make it longer, so it's up to you. But I am really loving this story...

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PSN: Razgriz247 Steam: Razgriz247

hehe thanks so much, although I'm more into poetry so all my stuff are going to be short
but sure I'll see if I can expand it more and post it on the site
well ... I just posted it on live journal maybe that's where you read it?

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North Wrote:hehe thanks so much, although I'm more into poetry so all my stuff are going to be short
but sure I'll see if I can expand it more and post it on the site
well ... I just posted it on live journal maybe that's where you read it?

Hm...then forget that I ever said that I've read it before. Maybe it's just that the flowers and barren land seemed similar to a different story.

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PSN: Razgriz247 Steam: Razgriz247

I really like this fic but isn't this a spoiler ? :

North Wrote:Was this the evidence of her transformation into the beast, Ragnorak? Was this all her fault?

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The answer : YESS !! (This pic doesn't belong to me too XD )

ahhhhh ....
I don't think so because if the setting is on top of Taejin's Tower, which means they should already know about Fang's past
plus ... hehe ... not sure how to take that part out

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